Wednesday, October 17, 2012

CGHub Character Jam

Hey guys! Would love some critiques-definitely want to tighten up my game!


1 comment:

  1. hey buddy, I think I already gave you a crit over skype but let me try come up with some stuff

    values are pretty good, but I'd like to see the light behind him be brighter, I think you could even go 100% white on a bit of it.

    comp is quite good(I dont know how to improve on it)

    I think I told you about his hands, but his hip seems a bit wide and his crotch might be a bit high. I think it'd be corect if he where waring tight pants http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1c2KzJbcGA , Its the beltbuckle that gave it away.

    some soft edges would really make it pop :)

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